this is from my writing class. the prompt was "about last night." i read this aloud, but it's so much easier to understand with italics representing one individual.
[beep vibrate. cell phone is answered]
so.. about last night.
well, i was sorta, you know... it wasn't anything.
oh, er, yeah me too. i didn't think.. uh..
yeah, thinking, god! where did that go?
seriously, if my brain is ice, i was melted.
er.. yeah melted. i see that, like slush and dirt. woh, dirty!
yeah and no shovel, er.. yeah
so.. um. about last night.
well, ok, maybe i meant some of it.
really? well.. um..
yeah so i was more ice, less slush
well ... ok...
so do you want to...
oh wait i have another call.
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